Steam and Metal

[BulletMagnet]

Nah, I volunteered for this one, it only took me a few hours, and again, I'd pass it in front of a few native-speaking critics before finalizing it. A mention in the credits would suffice.

I also realized that I forgot to look over the menus, I'll edit this post with those corrections once I tie up that loose end.

EDIT:

1 - "Torpedoes" is spelled incorrectly at the top of the "Help" screen.

2 - "Gunpower" should be two words.

3 - Not sure if "have a fun" was done on purpose, but if you're going for proper grammar take the "a" out.

4 - The "I" in the opening statement on the Credits screen should be capitalized.

That's all I found offhand. Also, feel free to ask if there's any specific gag I made in the script that you don't get, I can try to explain it.

EDIT 2 - While I'm at it, one last suggestion, especially if you plan on using my script, which is wordier than the original: a "press b to skip" insert or a "turn all story off" selection in the Options menu might be warranted for those who want to get down to the action quickly.

EDIT 3 - I actually just caught an error in my script; "flyer" should be "flier" in the ending segment. I'll add more if I find any...

[AvrDragon]

Oh, thank you very much. It's really very helfull.

[BulletMagnet]

Looks like the game has been bundled recently...has it been updated/edited/etc.?

[AvrDragon]

Looks like the game has been bundled recently...has it been updated/edited/etc.?

It's a shame, but i am still did nothing for steam and metal after update 1.1... making a metoridvania now.

But anyway really important is to update it before it will be greenlit. And i hope it will :3



Of course i will not forget your nice translation and in credits:-)

[BulletMagnet]

Heh, well, the dialogue is less important than the other stuff, so definitely get to that first. Good luck!

[AvrDragon]

greenlit

[AvrDragon]

STEAM AND METAL IS RELEASED ON STEAM

http://store.steampowered.com/app/335010

[BulletMagnet]

Congrats - has the Desura edition been updated yet? Looking forward to seeing the differences...

[AvrDragon]

Some steam codes

LL9C9-82HVP-ZV8BZ
W7BD2-7XCN7-ZRR5V [TAKEN]
7C3GM-44RXL-NWTII [TAKEN]
CID9X-MHCET-2VDDC [TAKEN]
W6BJR-IFMJT-22G8M [TAKEN]
Y8IJT-H8Q5G-LJP6Z
9V2TL-308B0-3GY27
7PTQ9-D9F00-YK20F
RM99M-P8QK0-N6HFF
7TJ70-YPM5C-FRTGY

Congrats - has the Desura edition been updated yet? Looking forward to seeing the differences...

Hi, your text is gorgelous. It is really hits the point and style. Thank you very much. Of course you are in credits

No, desura still has an old version. Is on my todo-list. Just need test some steam features like achivmets/leaderboards did not broke anything in pure PC release

[vector7]

Thanks for the key, i think i got 2nd code.

[Shepardus]

I claimed the third code, looking forward to giving this a try!

[RipperRoo]

wow thanks i needed some shmups on my computer, because im trying to develop one as well!! so this will help me maybe

first code is also already used and i took the fourth.

[vector7]

1cc'ed it on hard. I think it needs the option to reassign controls, i'm more comfortable with keyboard but default layout is not good for me so i played on gamepad. Also i feel that last boss is easier than stage 5 boss, though maybe it will be harder without bombs. Another nitpick: looks like it's hard to get good rank on stage 3 on hard difficulty. I understand that for a better rank you need to kill more enemies but it seems those flying from all directions enemies have too many hitpoints. Though i'm not a very good player maybe there is some way to kill most of them. Overall i though it's a pretty nice game.