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 Post subject: Re: ST: Gothic wa Mahou Otome (Full English Guide)
PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2017 9:30 am 


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Small update due to the sudden arrival of the new Skill, which we translated as Monster Koikoi. "Monsters, Bring It On" is too long to write, and "Monsters Come On" sounds confusing in a sentence: "try putting a come on on that spot", for example. "Try putting a koikoi on that spot" just sounds much better.

Improvement of the explanations:
- List of Skills and Descriptions
New Skill "Monster Koikoi" is explained.

Introduction:
- Fixed the outdated number of shot types
- Small changes to "Is Gothic wa Mahou Otome pay to win?"

Other:
- Corrected typos and revised weird grammar
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 Post subject: Re: ST: Gothic wa Mahou Otome (Full English Guide)
PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2017 4:28 pm 


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While transplanting the guide into a wiki format, I had to minutely read the explanations to find words that should be hyperlinked. I noticed many flaws -- especially on the first pages -- but didn't have any consistent progress to justify releasing a new version. So, I searched for an easy task to do. I added a behavior analysis table for assist Skills, pretty much nailing the Skills explanation.

Improvement of the explanations:
- List of Skills and Descriptions
Added a table for behavior analysis of assist Skills
Correction: Skill level up and Awakening doesn't increase the duration of offensive Skills other than Special Bullet

Other:
- Big improvements to the overall explanation quality of the first pages of the guide (mostly concerning quest selection and gameplay)
- Corrected typos and revised weird grammar
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 Post subject: Re: ST: Gothic wa Mahou Otome (Full English Guide)
PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2017 1:13 am 


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Gosh, what an amazing guide you wrote there you misters. Congratulations.
I wish I found it while I allowed myself to play on Android, but this thing is evil to me.
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 Post subject: Re: ST: Gothic wa Mahou Otome (Full English Guide)
PostPosted: Sat Jul 15, 2017 11:45 am 


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With this substantial update, the guide advances to its 13th version.

New explanations:
- In-game Skill Descriptions. Lists the in-game skill descriptions and relates them to their respective Skill, as some screens that display a familiar's stats don't show the Skill's name, only it's description. The guide reader can match the texts in order to figure out what Skill an in-game explanation concerns.
- Other Skill Considerations. Explains Skill Awakening with more details, Skills that have Boss Effectiveness (ボス有効) and gives advice for obtaining Skill-up items.
(As a result, any part of the guide that concerns Skills, such as During Stages and Equip Familiars, has new hyperlinks and overall better explanations.)
- Glossary. Hyperlinks over 120 terms in the guide. As a result, I felt like some explanations were lacking:
Added a clear definition for what a Friend as an introduction to the Friends List screen.
Defined clearly what is a miniboss and midboss in the During Stages and Boss Fight explanations.
Explained, in details, guild events and the many rewards that come from guild battles. As a result, many sections of the guild guide were improved with hyperlinks to this section.
Minor improvements were made to the Dating Screen, Gacha screens and other explanations.

Guild Battle and related explanations:
- Improved advice concerning Boost and Break usage.

Daily Checklist:
- Linked a daily guide video created by a foreigner player named Itasou.

Other:
- Added "Spiral" to the shot types list (new shot type).
- Corrected typos and revised weird grammar.
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 Post subject: Re: ST: Gothic wa Mahou Otome (Full English Guide)
PostPosted: Sat Jul 15, 2017 11:58 am 


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guigui wrote:
Gosh, what an amazing guide you wrote there you misters. Congratulations.
I wish I found it while I allowed myself to play on Android, but this thing is evil to me.


Thanks! That means a lot to me.
Our small community will be here if you ever decide to return.
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 Post subject: Re: ST: Gothic wa Mahou Otome (Full English Guide)
PostPosted: Fri Aug 04, 2017 9:26 am 


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13.5 update. As I was writing the Gomaotsu Guide Wiki's glossary, I noticed a few explanations could have revised. Not a major update, but some details may be worth seeing.

New explanation:
Table of Gacha Rates

Improvement of the explanations:
- List of Shot Types
Added scoring reference videos (Cross Blade D, Pile Bunker D, Photon Ray H/D).
- Other Skill Considerations
Added another consideration concerning the extra two seconds of Skill duration than the duration displayed on a Skill's description.
- In-game Skill Descriptions
Applied the same font for all Japanese text (the mistake happened because both fonts look very similar on Microsoft Word).
- Glossary
Added a more information for the redirected section of the guide for the following terms: Experience, National Score Contests.
Added a new term in the Gacha Terms category: Step Gacha.
Added links to the work-in-progress Gomaotsu Guide Wiki's explanation of basic game terms.
- Mission screen
Improved the explanation of event missions.
- Class Rankings:
Improved overall explanation.
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